The Portal!
I stared at the teleporter with growing anticipation. After years of research, here was the portal to another universe.
I wonder what sort of experience awaited me at the other side. It was becoming impossible to curb my excitement any longer! I decided to take the leap of faith and walk into the portal.
“This is going to be one hell of a trip” I heard the voice in my head insist!
- THE CUE THIS WEEK IS : TRIP
- SIX SENTENCES…NO MORE, NO LESS
Written for Unchartered: Recording Life Under the Radar’s – Six Sentence Story Challenge!
Rashmi P. Menon
A Single Mother with an unbreakable passion to Live the Life! I am a Writer/Author by passion and an IT Project Manager by profession. I am also the voice of Artemis at In The Pantheon - a multi-author collaborative writing project. When not hunting as Artemis, I am busy querying agents and working on my multiple writing projects. Women Empowerment and Child Rights Advocate.
25 Comments
ranu802
Seems to be a good prompt, I may not be able to do this one. I’m trying to read the books I have gathered to meet the challenge of reading 25.Thank you,Rashmi. 🙂
MindandLifeMatters
It’s a good prompt, Ranu. No worries, happy reading 🙂
EricaFlicksDust
An out of this world trip!!!😀
MindandLifeMatters
A trip to another universe! 😀😀
oneta hayes
Very good, Rashmi. Powerful imagery. Well written.
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you, Oneta! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Fun Simplicity
Wow! A new exciting adventure awaits! 😄 Way to go, Rashmi!😄
MindandLifeMatters
Hahah….yes, FS! 🙂
It could be an exciting or even a scary adventure! 😉
Annie
What a great take on the prompt, Rashmi! 😀
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you, Annie! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Nicodemas
Wow, so cool!
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you! 🙂
Dawn Marie
Very well done! Anticipation beating in my heart for what lies ahead. Hugs!
MindandLifeMatters
Mine too! Thank you, Dawn. Glad you enjoyed them 🙂
Hugs!
Robert Lambert Jones III
Shades of Stargate…
MindandLifeMatters
Oh is it? I don’t know stargates…is it a movie?
Robert Lambert Jones III
Yes, and (oddly enough) it has Kurt Russel in it. A spin-off television series also ran for a while.
MindandLifeMatters
Wow! Now, I feel I should watch it! Maybe some idea strikes and I can expand this into a short story! 😀
Robert Lambert Jones III
I often look at other works in literature and cinema to stimulate my imagination. When something comes out, it’s often different than when it went in. Best of success with your ideas…
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you! I’m thinking of building up on this story! 🙂
ivywalker
I want more!!!! I love a good sci fi transport story! The link is up until tues if you want to….
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you! I have linked it up! 🙂
Lisa @ The Meaning of Me
Agree – reminiscent of Stargate. Great movie and spin-off series. The character is definitely in for one hell of a trip…exciting!
Lisa @ The Meaning of Me
Tried to follow your Facebook and Pinterest links to follow, but the links seem to be broken.
MindandLifeMatters
Ohh thank you for letting me know. I will check it out!