The River of Life
The rocky mountain stood tall and strong; it would not bend. She tried and tried but could not escape the vigor of its barriers. Dying to break free, she pushed, she pressed, but acknowledged dejection yet again.
One fine day, she surged with an inexorable force, astounded, the rocky formation gave way! She raced on, scattering gravel on her way, peering out to see that beautiful world she had been missing! She explored the diverse, dramatic scenery and observed the sunrise in the valley. The newfound freedom made her stronger; elegantly she coursed along further towards the valley. The greenest, radiant, sun-lit valley they called paradise.
When she arrived, they welcomed her! They gave her a new name and called her βThe River of Lifeβ. For, in her journey towards freedom she granted them the element of life, the seed for civilization; she gave them βWaterβ!
This post is in response to the Miniature Writing Challenge #4 by An Artist At Heart. I opted to write a Mini Short Story (max 150 words as per the rules), for the theme ‘Water’.
26 Comments
Vibrant
Very beautiful and vivid, in fact sublime. π
Thanks,
Anand
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you very much! π
joseelavallee
Nice!
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you π
keithmiketom
Reblogged this on The Art and Design of KeithMikeTom and commented:
OOOh this is a great little challenge to try! check it out!
MindandLifeMatters
Enjoy the challenge! Look forward to reading your post π
keithmiketom
I’ll try!
Ananya
Very beautifully written.
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you, Ananya π
NJ
Wow π Beautiful story with a strong message π
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you! π
NJ
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Anand
What a lovely piece of writing. You brought the river to life and made that picture redundant.
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you Anand! π
Chandran Menon
Nicely written, inspiring.
Follow the river.
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you! will do! π
ramida78
This really is beautiful writing <3.
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you Ramida π
Nancy Wang
wow…
Arcane Owl
Love your writing. Very beautiful post indeed!
MindandLifeMatters
Thanks a bunch for the feedback! Good feedback always prompts me to write more! π
Fuzzy Panda Barista
That is beautiful. You gave the water life and personality. Well done
MindandLifeMatters
Thank you for the feedback π
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Baheya
Such a beautiful story! I love your interpretation of the challenge.
Rashmi P. Menon
Thank you. Iβm glad you enjoyed it.